Our latest flick- Check it out!

[theportlykicker]

And by "our" I mean me and my brother. He directed and wrote it, while I choreographed the action at the end, but as with most films made with friends it was largely a team effort.

Some shots look a little shaky and it starts off kinda slow but stick with it for the action and tell me what you think.

Project Run (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GzfSb7-7hug)

[Chen Zhen]

LOL@aBBa disc..

i like the chase scene, but i think its a tad too long..in comparison to the fight scene that is. the choreography is solid, but u guys need to follow through more with the attacks..but its understandable since none of u guys have any MA experience. good work!

[theportlykicker]

It's been a while since I posted this but only Chen's been kind enough to comment.

Anyone else want to? I'd really appreciate more feedback from you guys.

[Chilly Bong]

Not too bad. Like Chen Zhen said the chase is a little long but otherwise it's a solid effort. Think I recognised a few of the locations.

[Sifu Socky]

I liked it! It was pretty funny :-D

We should definitely have seen more fighting, though. Hey, you know that bit at the end where the beardy guy kicks the other guy's gun away? I think it would have been really cool if the guy on the floor had then also kicked the bad guy's gun, and then had a big punch-up with him too :-p

[theportlykicker]

Thanks for the feedback.

I'll definitely try and choreograph longer fight scenes in the future, but this one was so short because I'm quite slow at choreographing and my brother was in a rush to get the film finished.

@Chilly Bong- you think you recognize some of the locations?!? That's the last thing I expected to hear from anyone on this forum. All of it was filmed in our home town of Elland, West Yorkshire. Do you know it?

[Chilly Bong]

Small world. Yes, I know Elland. I used to live not too far from you in Halifax.

[theportlykicker]

That's awesome man! Small world indeed.